MAYAPPLE WRITERS' RETREAT
A MANUSCRIPT WORKSHOP
IN THE CATSKILLS
MAYAPPLE WRITERS’ RETREAT IN WOODSTOCK, NY
This was my 9th
year attending the Mayapple retreat. For
the last three years I’ve been
working with a group on
critiquing manuscripts. I’ve drifted
past the days of workshopping one poem at a time so this retreat is perfect for
me.
The workshoppers meet
at the Villetta Inn at the Byrdcliffe Conference Center – an old lodge
on a mountain above
Woodstock. There are no superstars here
and no one is treated like a student.
Those attending are peers, selected because of their experience and
publishing background. They come from all
over: Vincent Cooper from St. Thomas, VI; Patty McMillen, Oak Park, IL; Rachel
Coonce, Washington DC; Jessica deKoninck, Montclair, NJ, Zara Raab, Berkley,
CA; Wendy Taylor Carlisle, Eureka Springs, AR: Nola Garrett, Pittsburgh, PA;
Diane Lockward, West Caldwell, NJ; Shannon Frystak, Bethlehem, PA. And a smattering of upstate New Yorkers:
Leslie Gerber, Woodstock; Joyce Kessel, Hamburg; Robert McDonough and Maril
Nowak, both of Branchport; Gary Leising, Utica; Roberta Gould, West Hurley;
Judith Lechner, Saugeties.
My manuscript group
this year included Jessica de Konbinck
and Leslie Gerber. We sent each other
our manuscripts the week before arrival and had time to go over them and make
comments. We spent a day or more going over each manuscript, mostly discussing
arrangement, sectioning, titling, as well as going over each poem and deciding
if it fit where it was or should be moved. We made suggestions
about weak poems and tried to arrange it so that the strongest poems led off a
section.
These sessions have
been effective for me because I live in a small town and don’t have a
workshopping group. The first manuscript
I worked on was published almost on the first send. Wow. I
thought this was going to be the way of all things. Not.
The second years’ manuscript is still floating around from contest to
contest. This years’ manuscript is typo
free, neatened up
and ready to go. We’ll see.
There are readings every
night and four poets share their work
with audiences from the area and fellow workshoppers. Communal meals prepared in the big open
kitchen are a prelude to the readings.
Afternoons are for
hiking on the many trails in the area, serious shopping in downtown Woodstock
(all the boutique shops you can imagine) or lunching in one of the many
restaurants.
Judith Kerman began the
retreat when she couldn’t find a workshop where she wasn’t treated
like a student. She established a “comfortable, egalitarian
atmosphere” for writers.
A profitable (well,
intellectually profitable) way to spend a week among like minds.